让你的托福写作妙笔生花

  托福写作是很多考生们投入了大量时间和精力的项目，如何让你的托福写作妙笔生花，在考试中得到高分呢？今天，新航道小编就用实例阐述如何让你的托福写作妙笔生花。
  Directions:
  The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic.You will have 30minutes to plan,write,and revise your response.Typically,a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300-350words.
  Question:
  Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society.Choose another technological innovation that you think is important.Give specific reasons for your choice.
  题目讲解
  本题要求学生通过定位，概括和分类仔细审题，就某个问题写一篇感想，或就一个事件进行阐述，解释以及论证自己的观点，列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
  观点提示
  1、提出因特网改变了人们购物的方式来强调网络购物的便捷。
  2.补充因特网另外还有改变人群交流的方式来阐述在线交流的广泛。
  模板讲解
  How to do Z?Whether the traditional methods such as A,B and so on or the modern methods for example C and D have their advantages.Which you prefer depends on your own experience,I prefer C most in my point of view.As I see it,there are mainly advantages of C as follows:
This can trace back to my childhood.Once with curiosity,I（喜欢C的个原因）
Yet for another reason is that(喜欢C的第二个原因）.I can quote a common example(举一个例子支持第二个原因）.
  Then why I do not like others？For example,why I do not favor A?Because I have had a bad expericence with it.（举例说明）.So even when anyone mentions it,I will catch a feeling of fear.
  There are still many other reasons that can account to my fondness for C,but the obvious ones have been presented as above.C is unquestionably my first choice in doing Z,though I might be opposed by others.
  锦囊妙词
  profound——深奥的
  conglomerate——聚合物
  Although internet came into being about 2decadesago,it has changed the way we live much more than the last 200years.Its influence on business,communication and information is so profound that people now simply can't live without it.
  Based on the development of internet,a lot of newtypes of business ranging from international conglomerate to regional small online shops are also established.The most famous internet based international conglomerate would be Google.Companies like this basically do not sell products but their service.This changed the traditional way of doing business which always sinvolved some concrete products sell to people.Internet opens a cyber world in which a hugemarket is untapped.Besides large companies,internet also prospers small businesses.For example,local stores can do their business online.All they have to do is to create a website of their own and all customers need to do is to go to their websites and order what they want.Then they just need wait at home for the products they just purchased to be delivered.This way,we never need to worry about the traditional exhausting shopping.
  Internet also fundamentally changed the way people communicate.There are a lot of chatting programs,such as MSN,YAHOO MESSENGER,SKYPE,that make it possible for people from different parts of the world to have a conversation with each other as long as every one has access to internet.They even provide audio and video services meaning not only peole can chat,but also thay can hear and see each other.Besides that,what really makes them appealing is that they don't charge us for doing these things.These advantages definitely surpass the service that mobile phone provides us.
  Internet is also like a huge tank that can contain almost infinite information.A search hass hown that right now the information that internet can provide us exceeds any library in the world and some even argue that it has more information than all the libraries in total.Icertainly wouldn't doubt that.I use internet to search for a lot of information.Whenever I have an project to finfsh,the first thing I do is to go to the internet to find relevant materials.There is no doubt that internet has had a fun damental change on our everyday life.Though there are many problems that accompany with it,we can't deny that internet is one of the most innovations in human history.
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