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雅思写作真题解析

作者: 2019-02-18 11:14 来源:杭州编辑
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    雅思写作是中国考生们的一大头疼科目,今天新航道小编为大家整理了一篇新航道老师为大家分享的雅思写作真题解析,希望能帮助大家科学备考,有效。

    Task 1

    The graph below shows the number of new homes built in a particular region in the UK from 2010 and the figure predicted for the years till 2020.

    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

雅思写作Task 1真题解析

    The lines illustrate the historical numbers of new homes built in a region in the UK over the period of 2010 to the present as well as the predicted numbers for the years2020.

    It is most noteworthy that flats have been built increasingly since 2010. What is also notable is the projected further increase to approximately 3,000. In comparison, the numbers of the other three types of housing have been stable. Firstfollowing a slight slip to 2,500, the number of detached houses started to show an uptrend, which wassluggish yet continuous. Currently, it is 2,700, as same as the number of flats. Ananticipated decrease will take the number to a new low—roughly 2,400. In terms of terraced houses and semi-detached houses and, there has been a long-term gradual downtrend in each. As the slow decrease is likely to continue, the projected levels for 2020 are roughly 1,500 homes and just more than 1,000 homes.

    Overall, the change has been varying from one type of housing to another, and so will it in the future. 

    Task 2

    In some countries, people waste a lot of food at their homes or in shops or restaurants.

    What do you think are the reasons?

    What can be done to solve this problem?

    Behind the waste of food, ←题目给出的信息被浓缩到此处 which is upsetting, ironically, are two major improvements. ←经典的倒装形式

    This paradox however does not have to exist. ←故意把话反过来说【摆脱八股(八股的方式通常是先转述一下题目)的开头段落行文脉络】

    First, improved ←这个词很重要,故意对应开头段落里的improvements farming andbreeding produce redundant products. 接下来拆到细节说明一下,但是不是科学化的讨论,而是常识水平的说明→ With technology developed to a point where crops and livestock products are excessively produced, it is inevitable that people are unable to consume all of what they are provided. ←长难句:独立主格结构作状语的部分既说到了科技进步又说到了过度生产,主句部分直接说明了浪费的情况 As we seem to be aware of where the problem is – the excess production, we know at which point the problem should be solved. ←用一个句子而不是用一个词/词组衔接 Since we are technologically-enabled to produce in enormous quantities and everyone is well fed, it would make no sense that technology is not used in other way around to curb the production. ←长难句:原因状语从句 + 主句部分是主语从句。例证延展一下信息,也是凑字→ For example, safe chemicals may be used to limit the yield of produce, and the number of chickens, cattle and pigs can be cut.

    Second, improved←这个词很重要,故意再次对应开头段落里的improvements financial capability of individual households is also to blame. People nowadays have more income at their disposal and therefore are prone to overspend, typically on food.However, many of them overestimate their appetite, and the leftover eventually goes to the trash bin. In response, when we make a purchase in a market or place an order in a restaurant, it is advisable that we do not be too generous. The less lavish are we, the less likely is the waste of food.

    At this point, ←让结尾段也不显得孤立的逻辑连接词 the two reasons that account for the waste of food are crystal clear. Meanwhile, the wasteful production and consumption of food can be corrected. 

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