参加11月托福考试的考生们，作文写的还行吗？今天让我们一起回顾刚刚结束的三场托福考试中的独立作文题，高阶版详解析，新航道章老师手把手教你写好作文。
11月4日托福独立写作题目
A government spends money on a training course that train adults after the age of 25 in the most up-to-date skills in the workplace.
Do you think it is effective？Why or why not？
写作范文
【立场：more likely to be ineffective than to be effective】
Introduction
A society needs a competent workforce equipped with up-to-date skills. Otherwise, it will be unproductive and fall behind the time. However, when the administration spends money on a nationwide work skills development training program where eligible trainees are only adults at the age of 25 or older, it should not expect the desired return.
Body (仅在第二个理由处做完整的段落展示)
First, the age of 25 may be a late point of start. 【短小的中心句】Instead, an earlier age would be far desirable. 【思路已明确，继续展开保密】
Second, what is the scale of the program? Is a nationwide scale too wide? 【两个短小的中心句且是（设）问句】 A large-scale program will soon meet many difficulties: there may be regional differences that tear the program apart; there may be additional costs that add up to a colossal amount; there may be cases of corruption during the distribution of money to the local districts. For example, just as 【引导“类比”】 a national school curriculum has to be altered every time as it is adopted in every individual region, a national training program has to go through the many times of change–too many to remain original. If the arrangement cannot remain the way it is, no effects should be credited to the original. （本段落116 words）
Third, is it an ongoing program at regular times? What if it cannot survive administrative changes and be a permanent undertaking? 【短小的中心句且是（设）问句】【思路已明确，继续展保密】
Conclusion
To conclude, hardly can I be optimistic about the effectiveness of the program. I think it is more likely to be a failure or a borderline pass than to be a success.
11月10日托福独立写作题目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Competition among friends usually has a negative impact on friendship.
写作范文
【立场：Disagree】
Introduction
Competition is thought to inhibit the development of a friendship. This idea is not unreasonable. There are cases where friends split up because one wins and the other loses. 【在introduction处让步后转折，文章的主体部分就不需要再让步了，仅“让小小一步”也是一种可以接受的行文逻辑的设计】However, despite the many break-ups, I remain optimistic.
Reason 1：“无聊/陈词滥调”的理由，就不展开来说太多太久。
When a person believes that competition is favorable to a friendship,the immediate idea is that competition enables two individuals to better know each other. To win a contest, one must study the other—his or her character and personality. As a result, mutual understanding, which may be in-depth as the study goes on, will develop, laying a firm foundation for the friendship.
Reason 2
Without denying the aforementioned reason, we should find reasons that matter more. 【承上启下】 First, competition tests a friendship.In other words, whether a friendship is authentic is not certainunless the relationship goes through the competition between two people. It is only if a person, either winning or losing, respect rather than despising the other or being green with envy that the friendship is true. For example, a friend of mine always achieve higher academically than I do. However, never do I for this reason feel disgruntled, and he never looks down upon me. Instead, thanks to the numerous competitions during the years that challenge our relationship, we are aware of that our friendship is unbreakable.
Reason 3
In addition, a friendship is likely and sound only between two people who are able to compete with each other. 【思路已明确，展开内容保密】
Conclusion：两件大事：重申立场 + （笼统）总结全文（不分先后）
In conclusion, the competitive relationship does not diminish a friendship, as long as the two rivals do not resent but respect one another. The reasons, stated above, could not be clearer.
11月11日托福独立写作题目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Government is not doing enough work to educate people the importance of nutrition and healthy eating.
写作范文
【立场：Agree】
Introduction：不宜太长，信息推进要快，要在句话就切入主题。
An individual’s dietary choice and dining timetable matter to the person’s physical wellness and general wellbeing. As the choice is made, it may be made by the individual alone or under the government’s guidance. In most cases, the choice is personal and probably irresponsible, and the authority does not intervene adequately.
Body：两个“常识性”理由合并成一个段落
For starters, there are two reasons that may be no brainers. Frist, few public service ads about healthful eating are seen. 【措辞技巧：不在动词处否定；文脉技巧：段落中心句短小，当道理已经到了底层的时候，就直接“例证”】For example, seldom do people find enough ads that promote healthy eating, when they walk in the streets, turn on the TV or unfold a newspaper. 【措辞技巧：两个句子都是“否定前置”，突出否定意】 【论证技巧：正说反说】Instead, they are bombarded with countless commercials of junk food, such as chips, biscuits, and instant noodles. 【论证技巧：当一个道理已经讲到位的时候，不要硬凑篇幅】 Second, the subject that teach humans’ nutritional need is absent in the public schools’ curriculum. 【措辞技巧：不在动词处否定，而是选用了有否定含义的形容词】 Since the curriculum is designed by the government, the absence should be attributed to the government’s negligence.【内容技巧：接下来可以也应该通过一个举例论证来拓展内容（具体内容略），但是注意：不要写学校/政府应该做什么，而应该写学校/政府没有做什么。】
【下面这个理由，有点“大胆”慎用】
There is another reason that may be controversial. Our government fails to legally inform our fellow citizens of the need for proper eating. The reality is that most countries do not have laws that tell the citizens to eat properly. 【论证技巧：类比论证，建立prior knowledge为参照物】However, just as smoking can be outlawed, having a nutritious and balanced diet can be legally required. Some would oppose this idea for the reason that the law would be a nanny-state legislation that interferes with people’s lifestyle choice.Nevertheless, when citizens are unconscious of their unhealthy diet or knowingly irresponsible in eating, why do we question the legitimacy of the administration’s intent to prohibit of a lifestyle that incurs medical bills that are too massive to be redeemed? 【措辞技巧：反问句】
Conclusion
In conclusion, government is not doing its job adequately in educating people the importance of nutrition and healthful eating. It【it的虚指】would be enough, if government did enough publicity about healthy eating, incorporated the knowledge about nutrition into the school curriculum, or mandated a healthy diet.【内容技巧：主体部分理由的“词组化”缩略总结】
